Joel was yelling, as usual, ordering me to clean up my block
and straighten my legs, watch the footing with the turn, and so on. All the
while I was stressing about the paper due in my English class, and trying to
remember what exactly it was that I had to write about.
My pose was
ready to attack. Kale stood across from me in a defensive stance, awaiting my
move. Lifting my leg to a high kick, a ringing pitched through the air,
rendering me useless.
A twinge of
pain shot through my leg as I lost my balance and landed awkwardly on the
ground. I looked at Kale, as he got up, a laugh on his face.
“You
couldn’t turn your phone off?” I asked with annoyance, turning to Joel.
He ignored
my snide comment and went to answer the call.
Clapping
sounded in my ears as Kale came walking my way. “Bravo.” I shot him an angry
glare. “What? I can’t stop and appreciate the awesomeness that was your last
attack?”
“Yeah,
yeah. Shut up.” I tried to keep my embarrassment from showing.
“Here, let
me help.” Kale stuck his hand out and pulled me up from the ground.
My balance shook and I fell into him, my hands
landing on his chest for support, his face only inches from mine, the smile on
his face surprised. My eyes moved from his lips up to his eyes, where something
sparkled. A cold breeze caressed my shoulder where Kale held me, with the rest
of my flesh rippling with heat. He was so close, if I leaned in just a little more,
our lips would meet.
“You okay?”
Kale’s voice was sultry and inviting. Our eyes met, an electric zap shot through
me. His eyes moved to my lips and the barrier between us weakened.
“Alright let
me put you on speaker.” Joel’s voice brought us back to reality. The moment was gone like a puff a smoke, just a memory of what could have been. How could I
come so close to letting go? Especially when it was exactly what Red wanted me
to do.
“Um, yeah,
I’m fine,” I pushed away from Kale, moving my eyes away from his.
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nice! I love the movement of his gaze to her lips, and how close she comes to giving in.
ReplyDeletethanks!
DeleteOoooh so fun!
ReplyDeleteha! Yup, also fun to write.
DeleteI enjoyed this bit- especially that she is kicking-boxing with him.
ReplyDeletethanks!
DeleteNice excerpt!
ReplyDeletethank you.
DeleteNice job! Those darn no kisses. :)
ReplyDeleteI know, so frustrating but so fun to write.
DeleteNice job! Very fun excerpt. :)
ReplyDeletethank you!
DeleteOooh, that went from fun to sizzling fast. Lovely!
ReplyDeletethanks, that's what i was going for!
DeleteI would want to kiss the smirk right off Kale's face. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteso does my MC!
DeleteVery hot! Well done! I'm intrigued about her thoughts after the non-kiss, too!
ReplyDeleteI guess I should have explained that bit, it has to do with the plot and her stalker.
DeleteWhat s great excerpt! Fire and Ice sounds hot!
ReplyDeletethank you!
DeleteNice job! Caught myself smiling through the entire read through!
ReplyDeleteyay, makes me happy!
DeleteGreat scene! Fire and Ice sounds fantastic! Thanks so much for participating!
ReplyDeletethanks for hosting the blogfest! I'll have to remember to sign up next year too, it was lots of fun!
DeleteGreat setting, and I love the 'let me put you on speaker' mood breaker. :)
ReplyDeleteit was most definitely a mood killer, but if it hadn't been for that then kissing would have ensued
DeleteA fighting scene and an almost kiss. Perfection!
ReplyDeleteha! THanks!
DeleteFire and Ice seems like the perfect name for this. Hope she becomes a badass later on in the book! :)
ReplyDeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteFabulous!
ReplyDeleteThat was a great scene! A lot of fun to read. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt!
ReplyDeleteOoo, so hot tension-filled, I loved it! Great job! :) Here' s the link to my entry if your interested in reading it: http://thebloggergirlz.blogspot.com/2013/01/no-kiss-blogfest.html
ReplyDeleteThanks!
~Ella
Hi, Prerna! I'm a few days late in checking out the entries for the No-Kiss Blogfest, but late is better than never!
ReplyDeleteAnyway, I loved your entry! Absolutely sizzling. Thanks so much for sharing with us! :)
~Wendy Lu
The Red Angel Blog