Monday, July 16, 2012

Get Hooked On My Hookers

It's Bloghop Time! FFF is running the show, so stop by and read some more Hookers. Mine are below.

 These are from Fire and Ice. I hope you guys enjoy.

1. Here's the deal; I was pissed.

2. She was staring off into the distance the first time I saw her.

3. Work was crazy busy

4. I finally managed to successfully get my so-called best friend off the phone

5. Sitting on the edge of my bed with dry clothes, a blanket around my shoulders, did little to block the cold air trailing my skin, leaving a numbing sensation.

23 comments:

  1. Great lines! I really liked the last one. :) Can't wait to see your hangers!

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  2. The voice is there from line one! Perfect!

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  3. I love that first one! It makes me laugh and it defiantly makes me want to read on :)

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  4. Very cool! I love 1 the most, followed closely by 5!

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  5. I agree with everyone. You have incredible voice in those lines. Well done!

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  6. Wow, great voice. The last one really hooks me. Can't wait to read your hangers!

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  7. Love em! Voting for 1, 4 and 5, but they're all really good!

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  8. I agree with everyone else! Loved the first one especially!!

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  9. All really great but especially the first one!

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  11. Love that attitude in Number 1. Totally get a feel for her already. Really well done.

    Thanks for participating in the hop! :)

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  12. Good deal! The first line is great.

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  13. I loved the first one! Well done all around! :)

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  14. I love the voice in #1. I think out of all of them, it's my favorite!

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  15. She sounds like one tough cookie! Good job!

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  16. I LOVE the first one. Ha! You can't get much more to the point than that.

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  17. I love one and five, although I think I like 1 better.

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  18. Oh, you got me laughing with that first one... awesome!

    I want to read more!!!!!

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  19. Thanks for all the comments! Glad you liked them. I'm excited for you guys to read my Hangers, I think they're a little bit stronger.

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  20. I like #1 and #4, especially the first one:)

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