Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Hanging For My Hangers

It's time for the Hangers in this Bloghop! Once again, the ladies at Falling For Fiction are holding this shindig, so go say hello.

The hangers go along with the five hookers I posted on Monday
1. That string finally seemed to be pulled too tight, and it snapped away.
2. The ride home was going to be longer than I had anticipated.
3. Then I released her to a world that no longer made any sense.
4. “Start explaining.” My voice was tight.
5. Then maybe, if it was possible, I would find the green-eyed gem that had unknowingly changed my life forever.


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19 comments:

  1. Jennie BennettJuly 18, 2012 at 7:46 AM

    #'s 3 and 5 are excellent, I would keep reading :)

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  2. Kyra LennonJuly 18, 2012 at 7:53 AM

    Excellent! I love number three!

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  3. Emily R. KingJuly 18, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    All of these are awesome. How can I choose? Really. I can't.

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  4. Nancy ThompsonJuly 18, 2012 at 10:12 AM

    Wow, they're all very, very good, but I think #3 is the best. It has a very haunting quality to it. Nicely done!

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  5. 1000th.monkeyJuly 18, 2012 at 11:32 AM

    You've certainly got me asking questions... my personal favourite is the first one.... since that string is dangling there taunting me...

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  6. Christine RainsJuly 18, 2012 at 12:07 PM

    Fabulous hangers! Those would keep me reading on to the next chapters.

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  7. Rachel SchieffelbeinJuly 18, 2012 at 1:21 PM

    Nicely done. These all really hint at something more, making me want to know more!

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  8. Ink in the BookJuly 18, 2012 at 2:15 PM

    I am rooting for #3. That sentence is the best hanger so far. I want to know what is going on!

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  9. Elizabeth SeckmanJuly 18, 2012 at 2:24 PM

    #5...green eyed gem...love that!

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  10. VikLitJuly 18, 2012 at 2:42 PM

    Really nicely done!

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  11. Hope RobersonJuly 18, 2012 at 3:57 PM

    So emotional! Loved #3 :0 Nicely done!

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  12. Leigh CovingtonJuly 18, 2012 at 4:20 PM

    Great lines Prerna. 1,3 and 5 are my fave!

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  13. Jenny S. MorrisJuly 18, 2012 at 5:34 PM

    Oh, #3 and #5 baby. Love green-eyed gem as a way to describe someone!!

    Thanks for participating!!

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  14. TrishaJuly 18, 2012 at 8:31 PM

    #3 is totally my favourite. Nice work! :)

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  15. Tara TylerJuly 19, 2012 at 1:56 PM

    those are great! full of voice and expectations!
    excellent work!

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  16. Nick WilfordJuly 19, 2012 at 3:19 PM

    Great tension in these, just as in your hookers. I like #3 a lot!

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  17. Cassie MaeJuly 20, 2012 at 8:17 AM

    Love them all... #3 my fav. :)

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  18. Kelley LynnJuly 22, 2012 at 12:04 PM

    This one is my favorite! 'Then maybe, if it was possible, I would find the green-eyed gem that had unknowingly changed my life forever.'

    Thanks so much for participating!

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  19. Lisa ReganJuly 22, 2012 at 8:31 PM

    3 is really lovely! Well done!

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