Monday, July 16, 2012

Get Hooked On My Hookers

It's Bloghop Time! FFF is running the show, so stop by and read some more Hookers. Mine are below.

 These are from Fire and Ice. I hope you guys enjoy.

1. Here's the deal; I was pissed.

2. She was staring off into the distance the first time I saw her.

3. Work was crazy busy

4. I finally managed to successfully get my so-called best friend off the phone

5. Sitting on the edge of my bed with dry clothes, a blanket around my shoulders, did little to block the cold air trailing my skin, leaving a numbing sensation.

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23 comments:

  1. Emily R. KingJuly 16, 2012 at 8:47 AM

    1 and 4 have tons of voice!

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  2. Cassie MaeJuly 16, 2012 at 9:05 AM

    Great lines! I really liked the last one. :) Can't wait to see your hangers!

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  3. Hope RobersonJuly 16, 2012 at 9:20 AM

    The voice is there from line one! Perfect!

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  4. Jennie BennettJuly 16, 2012 at 10:09 AM

    I love that first one! It makes me laugh and it defiantly makes me want to read on :)

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  5. Lisa ReganJuly 16, 2012 at 11:35 AM

    Very cool! I love 1 the most, followed closely by 5!

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  6. Christine RainsJuly 16, 2012 at 11:57 AM

    I agree with everyone. You have incredible voice in those lines. Well done!

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  7. Jenny S. MorrisJuly 16, 2012 at 12:36 PM

    Wow, great voice. The last one really hooks me. Can't wait to read your hangers!

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  8. Leigh CovingtonJuly 16, 2012 at 1:20 PM

    Love em! Voting for 1, 4 and 5, but they're all really good!

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  9. Kimberly GabrielJuly 16, 2012 at 1:31 PM

    I agree with everyone else! Loved the first one especially!!

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  10. VikLitJuly 16, 2012 at 2:58 PM

    All really great but especially the first one!

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  12. Kelley LynnJuly 16, 2012 at 3:37 PM

    Love that attitude in Number 1. Totally get a feel for her already. Really well done.

    Thanks for participating in the hop! :)

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  13. L.M. MillerJuly 16, 2012 at 4:36 PM

    Good deal! The first line is great.

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  14. Rachel SchieffelbeinJuly 16, 2012 at 5:07 PM

    I loved the first one! Well done all around! :)

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  15. Lynn(e) SchmidtJuly 16, 2012 at 6:21 PM

    I love the voice in #1. I think out of all of them, it's my favorite!

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  16. Elizabeth SeckmanJuly 16, 2012 at 10:41 PM

    She sounds like one tough cookie! Good job!

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  17. Nick WilfordJuly 17, 2012 at 1:32 AM

    I LOVE the first one. Ha! You can't get much more to the point than that.

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  18. UnknownJuly 17, 2012 at 5:28 AM

    Number 1 is also my choice!

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  19. SaraJuly 17, 2012 at 7:26 AM

    I love one and five, although I think I like 1 better.

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  20. 1000th.monkeyJuly 17, 2012 at 4:20 PM

    Oh, you got me laughing with that first one... awesome!

    I want to read more!!!!!

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  21. prerna pickettJuly 17, 2012 at 5:50 PM

    Thanks for all the comments! Glad you liked them. I'm excited for you guys to read my Hangers, I think they're a little bit stronger.

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  22. TrishaJuly 18, 2012 at 12:12 AM

    I like #1 and #4, especially the first one:)

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  23. Goku shresthaJuly 18, 2012 at 1:26 AM

    I liked the last one :)

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